Project: New Man 1 Page 21
Meanwhile, back at the Fortress Foundation’s Moriah Building This page shows most of the supporting cast watching Dave on the Evening News. We seldom see all of them in one room together. End of Chapter 3. See you Wednesday in Chapter 4.
Mark’s Remarks: This page is more than it seems on the surface! Sure it’s a natural part of the story line to this point and the official closing page of the chapter, but look at all we get with this one: First ,we have all the supporting cast on the same page even if all are not clearly identified as of yet. Second, we have the whole cast’s view point on what just happened on Dave’s first big outing as New Man. This was more than the few public PR appearances he had made before just to let everyone know the Five Lakes area had a new public protector. This could be a critical point in Dave’s training and we can hear that in the cast’s opinions as well as their concern for their friend. As you can see everyone’s reactions we’re different and it’s interesting to see more of the reactions which come in the next chapter and help develop the characters of the story all the more. So don’t go away yet, we’ve plenty more interesting scenes to come!





Mark’s Remarks: This page is more than it seems on the surface! Sure it’s a natural part of the story line to this point and the official closing page of the chapter, but look at all we get with this one: First ,we have all the supporting cast on the same page even if all are not clearly identified as of yet. Second, we have the whole cast’s view point on what just happened on Dave’s first big outing as New Man. This was more than the few public PR appearances he had made before just to let everyone know the Five Lakes area had a new public protector. This could be a critical point in Dave’s training and we can hear that in the cast’s opinions as well as their concern for their friend. As you can see everyone’s reactions we’re different and it’s interesting to see more of the reactions which come in the next chapter and help develop the characters of the story all the more. So don’t go away yet, we’ve plenty more interesting scenes to come!


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